As we stood there by the sea shore,
Lost in our private thoughts galore.
The waves crashing loudly on the shore.
Reminding us that we were together, no more.
Tomorrow will decide our love’s destiny,
A love that once was, but can now never be,
We have come a long way now,
Leaving our love behind somehow.
As the judge unties our marriage vows,
Setting us free from the clutches of doubt.
No longer will we be together now.
Can we just not remain friends somehow?
Tomorrow is still a day, one more.
Today is what we have for sure.
Deciding to be the perfect couple for a day,
In the hope that this memory will forever stay.
Leaving our inhibitions behind for a day,
We drive away to that far away place.
For one last time we defy our fate,
To change what has now become hate.
The room is cozy warm and true.
It’s our passion that rings untrue.
Just one time can we not honestly be,
Happy like we once used to be?
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Hi Madhuri,
Thanks so much. So glad that you liked it.
Shuvashree
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Wow. nice poem :-)
Madhuri
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Hi Vinitha,
Thanks alot. Glad you liked my rhymes in the poem and that you liked the thought .
Shuvashree
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Hi kunjubi,
Thanks alot. Glad you could relate to it.
Shuvashree
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Hi Komlet,
Thanks alot. Yeah life is about hope isn't it. ?
And about being positive and optimistic.
Shuvashree
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Parting and yet yearning...for more...or a possibility still...
Nice use of rhyme,
Good work,
Vini.
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shuva.... marvellous.....life is not for fulfilling the ego.licking one's own wound is a despicable experience..compatibility in matrimony is an erratic word...That was a good one!.. Cheers.. kunjubi
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still a spark of hope is there to be together again.............and let it be..........let it work its own without being judgemental ..........heartfelt emotions flowing so naturally......indeed nice work.
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Hi Yash,
Thanks. Glad you could relate to it. I tried to bring out the sensitivity of a divorce between two people who loved each other.
Shuvashree
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Just one time can we not honestly be,
Happy like we once used to be?
Sad and touching poem...again written beautifully.............yash
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