Tomorrow by now you will go away,
Today is all there is for us to embrace.
Knowing that you may never return again,
We make the most of what there is today.
Driving in through the iron gates,
A beautiful garden in front, we gaze.
Bluebells swaying on either side.
The humming bird chirping to my right.
Waiting in the car for you to check us in,
My heart in my mouth I sadly think.
A great job opportunity though it is,
Can our love survive this long distance stint?
The Daisies, Tulips, Carnations, all
Are mute spectators to my aching heart.
How do I just let you go away?
Why can’t we together, forever stay?
Quietly we sit by the fire place.
My grieving heart why can’t it just wait?
Let me enjoy the warmth of your embrace
Tomorrow is as yet far away.
My heart knows you will find someone new.
Long distant love is probably just not true.
In your absence I too may find someone new,
Is this the kind of love we are married to ?
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Hi Vini,
All writing is either from ones own experinces or from those that you see experinced by people around you. My writing too reflects various emotions that I see around me in addition to my own.
Shuvashree
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Kunjubi,
Thanks alot and many thanks for your interest in my poems. So glad that you liked my various moods and poems.
Shuvashree
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Hi zorba,
Thanks alot. This was just a poem based on a thought .
Shuvashree
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There's a pain in the poems u write (romantic ones).
From experience?
Vini.
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shuva... passionate...frustrating... all the bliss in love is there among the words.. Appreciate u for the mood. chhers kunjubi
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Shuvashree ji
You will definitely find your TRUE LOVE.
Zorba
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Hi Viv,
Thanks alot. Yeah that was the same thought and question on which my poem is based. Just put it in a romantic and poetic form and thats why the question(s)
at the end.
Shuvashree
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Hi writer at heart,
Thanks alot. So glad that you liked it
Shuvashree
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Hi Cheti,
Hey thanks so much

Finally you could relate to my poem.
Yeah it surely is a powerful question, but why frightening??? Aren't you sure that you can be monogamous??? I remember you taking summer holidays from marriage
Just Kidding
Shuvashree
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Shurvashree,
Ah yes, the condition of human love and human nature... can it sustain or are the experts correct in saying that human beings really aren't a monogamous species? Just a thought... loved your poem.
Viv
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