I know you find me in everything you see,
Cause you still love me, crazily as can be.
Now that I have gone, far away from you,
You have replaced me, with someone new.
In her glistening eyes I come alive to you,
Her smile keeps me, forever haunting you.
In her merry chatter you hear my voice,
Her hair colour is the exact hue as mine.
You had told me when I was with you,
You would forever, always remain true.
My face you might replace, with someone new,
My heart is what will, forever shine through.
In your glance she sees me too,
That is what makes her, angry with you.
Your restlessness is what makes her so sure,
That I am present amongst you for sure,
Though you love her truly and sincerely,
It's me; you are in love with and will always be.
For you can never, forget what I did for you,
Since when you were nobody, I supported you.
Today you have everything you ever need,
But you have lost me and that is the irony.
While you are chasing a ghost, that once was me,
Ensure you hold on to her love as tight as can be.
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Hi Shani,
Thanks so much for your very warm comments and I am so glad that you liked the poem and could relate to it.
Shuvashree
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Hi Sophie,
I just lost the meaning of the previous line though
I mean what did you mean by "so whatever you see as love here ....may not be really that!" ??????
Thanks for appreciating my work
Hey Sophie I m not really looking out for love in Sulekha, have enough of that in my life, varieties I mean, just sharing some of that on Sulekha
Shuvashree
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Today you have everything you ever need,
But you have lost me and that is the irony.
While you are chasing a ghost, once was me,Ensure you hold on to her love, tight as can be.
Very nice :)
When you were nobody, since then I supported you.For you can never, ever forget what I did for you,
Love is unconditional... it never demands anything. If it does, then its a barter system. you do this for me and i will do it for you ;)
Just my 2c.
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nice one ! May be going out of rythm at places .. but nice .. thank god that "freeing" message at the end !!!
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Shuvasree, This poem is fantastic.....
Keep Blogging...
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Hi Shuva,
Where do you find such lovely words, dear....I am amazed and moved at the expressions...
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Exteremely Beautiful........I Liked The Words U Wrote, Its Very Rhythmetic & The Best Things Is That U Conveyed The Exact Message,,,,What Else A Writer Wants..Liberty Of Soul................Comments are precious just give when u feel like........Shani
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"love is not love tat alters when alteration finds"
so whatever you see as love here ....may not be really that!
nice work gal...
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