I know you find me in everything you see,
Cause you still love me, crazily as can be.
Now that I have gone, far away from you,
You have replaced me, with someone new.
In her glistening eyes I come alive to you,
Her smile keeps me, forever haunting you.
In her merry chatter you hear my voice,
Her hair colour is the exact hue as mine.
You had told me when I was with you,
You would forever, always remain true.
My face you might replace, with someone new,
My heart is what will, forever shine through.
In your glance she sees me too,
That is what makes her, angry with you.
Your restlessness is what makes her so sure,
That I am present amongst you for sure,
Though you love her truly and sincerely,
It's me; you are in love with and will always be.
For you can never, forget what I did for you,
Since when you were nobody, I supported you.
Today you have everything you ever need,
But you have lost me and that is the irony.
While you are chasing a ghost, that once was me,
Ensure you hold on to her love as tight as can be.
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shuva..... you are too optimistic and very sensitive also.. It reflects like a sore thumb in most of your writings. Commendable style. cheers kunjubi
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No dear u are only 0ne in world nothing can be replace. Please accept my love
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Dear dear sophie,
Well if you really did you would not ask me this out of curiosity or otherwise. You would not suggest him living alone and unhappy pining for you when you are gone. You would set him free and be happy for his happiness. 
You could gaurd your love as a ghost too.
Let me ask you a counter question -Have you ever loved anyone truly???
I mean not yourself .
But then again these are my thoughts and my poem.
Shuvashree
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Cheti,
Thanks and will take you up on it some time.
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Arvind,
Thanks so much . So glad that you liked it and when you truly loved someone you can be happy for their happiness and you would surely want them to move on once you are gone. You would not want the one you love to be alone and unhappy.
Shuvashree
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Hi Viv,
Thanks so much for you warm comments, they mean a lot coming from you as you are a superb writer yourself and I love your writing too .
Through my writing I try and articulate my various thoughts on love and though they may not be acceptable or understood by many I stick to my views and convictions and maybe thats what makes them powerful.
No wonder I am asked so many questions.
I really have no qualms about thinking different. I am really so glad that you can relate to my thoughts.
Shuvashree
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Dks,
Thanks alot.
Shuvashree
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Shuvvy
guy whould move on with another female?
cant he live alone? just asking in curiosity??
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Thats a surely an offer I cant refuse !
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Hi Shuvashree, Best Regards.
A tuely romantic poem indeed.
Love is sublime, you see. But life has
to move on, and the guy has chosen
someone else to lean on...
Powerful synchronisation of words and
feelings. I liked it.
GOD BLESS.
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